1. Motivation:
- Every person has a time in their life where they have to listen to some one of their authority and have to take in what every that person says with out saying anything in return no matter how much they want. Weather it's a parent and a child, a teacher and student, or even military commanders and their soldiers, every one has been a role in one of those situations.
- When you leave home to join the military, once you get there you are no longer to every be the same as when you arrived. The soldiers are coming into practice with passed knowledge in their lives of how they grew up. The military commanders must take grown men and women and reshape their lives completely in order to be in combat and survive. They must take everything that the soldiers know and teach them to throw it out the window so they can start from new, so the commanders can start them from scratch and bring them up like as children becoming grown men. Using their techniques to shape them into the men and women that they want them to be. Weather that means using harsh discipline or not.
- I think team work is the most important aspect in order to complete any task. In the military soldiers first join to protect their country. After the first couple of week that you are still there your motivation to stay there is your family. Once that where’s off and you in the middle of combat you begin to realize that you are there for the guy fighting next to you. So if you mind is not set on team work, then you need to question yourself why you are in the military.
- The reason behind the discipline that the commanders give their soldiers is to keep them in order in and out of wartime. They make sure that if something were to happen the commanders would be able to have control of the troops at all time. During wartime if a commander can not control his or her soldiers drastic things could occur. Like friendly fire, multiple deaths that could have been prevented, or even loss of war.
2. Read and Analyze Poem:
- The poem "The Charge of the Light Brigade" Tennyson discusses the nobility of 600 soldiers marching into a vividly described hell raising battle and although they did not all come out of the battle, still all 600 soldier should be honored by every one, for they went against an army of soldiers that were larger and stronger then them.
- In the poem Tennyson has sayings of which he creates to describe the intensity of the battle for example: Half a league: The army was much smaller than their opponents in the valley of death: The battle field Into the Jaws of Death: Into the Mouth of Hell: The soldiers charging into their known death.
- Tennyson uses repetition to describe the intensity of the battle. For example, cannons to the left and right of them- trying to get the reader to visualize the explosions in battle. He also repeats the saying, the six hundred; he says this repetitively to ensure the reader knows that the army is small and is taken a huge risk in order to win the battle.
- Courage and Honor- The six hundred men in this battle would not have gone into the war if they did not have courage. Being such a small army and so weak compared to their enemies. They were all aware of this situation and they still were willing to going into battle. And because of this all should Honor all six hundred who went and fought in the battle.
- Leaders and Followers- In this battle I don’t think that there was any leaders or followers for they all worked as a team instead of individuals. They trusted each other enough to stay alive and gain the honor of their friends and family.
- Justice and Vengeance- Although the 600 soldiers were going into but to get justice and although they did not get it they have justice with in themselves in order to have done that and come out alive knowing that they succeeded in coming out of the battle alive.
3. Overture of 1812:
- This is an up beat song which gives a feeling of power. Not once in this song is there a single instrument playing so that also shows teamwork. It starts off quiet but it gains strength and becomes louder we approach the heat of war and also where the cannons shoot off. When the cannons shoot off you can feel the pain off people dying in a large sum. It gives a feeling of victory at the end, hearing the fast pace and extended notes.
I liked your reflection of the poem. You really explained how you analyzed it
ReplyDeletei think that your refelctions are good but you need to check spelling errors. Also i think that if you put like a space or some kind of indication of where new ideas(ex. justice and vengeance-..., etc.)starts that it would be easier to read and it would not be like so jumbled up looking.
ReplyDeleteAlex this poem is about an army of soldiers marching "into their own death" and they all know it, what do you think? They are fighting against an army who is much bigger and stroger than they are. Hence the part of them marching "into their oen death."
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ReplyDeleteI think that they were very brave and courageous to go into any army so much biiger than theirs. I imagine that their outer expression was "strict face" but i wonder how they felt on the inside (preparing for death, praying to god, brave, cocky, or what?)
Haha I agree i do not think that i would have been able to do what they I do wonder what they were thinking but they must have been brave for what they did.
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ReplyDeleteI mean yeah they were defiantly brave but if i was in that moment i think that i would have had a serious face because that is probalbe the way i would have been taught but in my head i probably would have been thinking about all my love ones and praying to god and evrything, It is weird how poems and things like that are so detailed that it can make me think like this.I wonder if this poem was created from like a journey of one of the soldiers of something?
March 30, 2009 5:33 PM
I agree, when I read this poem i thought of my loved ones but i also thought of the honor of saving many other lives just by laying my life down. I thought about who was writing it, was it the general, one of the soldiers, or was it a bystander because it says, cannons to the right and left of THEM.
ReplyDeleteI am not quite sure of who was writing it and that was why i wondered if the poem was just the persective of what may have been going on at that time to an irrelevant person.
ReplyDeleteIt would make things alot clearer to know who the speaker was, mabey doing research on the author would give us a hint.
ReplyDeleteI agree because if we knew who the speaker was then maybe we could make a better assumption of the emotions at that time; but no matter who the speaker is, i know for sure that the poeple in this poem were courageous and as america as a whole we owe thanks to all of the soldiers who have put their lives on the line for us....Thanks
ReplyDeleteI agree amd even if it was a bystander and they lived to tell the day, that must have been a very powerful yet life threatening moment for them, to experience the threat of war and yet not actually be in it.
ReplyDeleteYeah i liked that poem and i think it is really cool when you listen to the Overture of 1812 in the background as you read it slowly because it makes it evne more dramatic!
ReplyDeleteI actually wasnt to fond of the Overture of 1812 beacause it sounded to happy to be a discriptance of a war.
ReplyDeleteWell yeah sometimes i think that the notes were a little too soft for the whole theme of deadly war but when they hit th dramatic parts it was preety good. Sometimes though it was a bit to calm, then dramatic, then calm, then dramatic, you know!?
ReplyDeleteYes i do know but all in all i think that war in general wheather its "happy" or terrifying, can be a life changing experience just look at the poem.
ReplyDeleteI strongly agree!
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